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Chapter 11: The Art of Stealth Zeke and his friends had just made it through a life-threatening obstacle. The Hall of Traps was something that no one wanted to face again. But now it was back to finding the third note, which was in the cellar. Alice read the map and discovered that it was not...

Chapter 3: Separated Daniel and Simon had faced their first enemy, which was a giant spider. Daniel could not tell whether it was poisonous or not, but he wanted to leave in case the spider had any friends. Daniel was beginning to gain some confidence in his self-defense. Also he felt that he...

Chapter 2: Daniel's First Defenses Daniel and Simon had rarely ever been through an adventure as sinister as this one looked to be. There seemed to be no way out of the city other than the gate, which was sealed with a metal bar that was too high up for Daniel and too heavy for Simon to move...

Chapter 1: The Walk that Started it All Author's Notes: you may be wondering why I've included descriptions of what a Buizel and a Raichu look like. That's because I had a dilemma when I wrote this chapter because people who never even heard of Pokemon began to read this story. A teacher from...

This story is connected to Lucario and the 10 Ordeals. If you want a better understanding of some of the elements of this story, please read Lucario and the 10 Ordeals. Prologue Daniel was one of the few pokemon that had no so-called "poke-powers." Those same pokemon, including Daniel, had...

Chapter 10: Survival of the Smartest Zeke and his friends left the storeroom that had the second note. It seemed that their lives now depend on the notes that are scattered around the castle. Although they had somewhere to go, they had not thought of a plan yet. Now, they were in the hallway...

Chapter 9: A Turn for the Better Zeke and the others now had a choice to make. Both of the paths in the hallway seemed equally unpleasant. However, Zeke and the others had no real reason to think about choosing a certain path, because they had no knowledge of what lied in either. So they...

Part 2: The Test of Resourcefulness Chapter 8: Unfamiliar Territory The portal that was supposed to take Zeke and Alice to the world of Pokemon, deposited them inside a massive, dimly-lit room that was made entirely of stone. Zeke was shocked at the result. "This isn't the world of...

Thanks for the tip; I'll keep that in mind.

I hope I don't have to wait long. That would mean posting time x24.

I have a story on there that's 24 chapters long so far, and I aimed to make 24 separate posts. What's happened is that the forum keeps posting it as an edit instead of a new post. I can't post chapter 7 because all the other chapters have filled my 1st chapter post to capacity. Am I doing...

Part 1: The Test of Courage Chapter 1: The Portal and Behind It Zeke was returning home from his friend's house after spending the night there. He was quite pleased with himself after entertaining his friend's family with his childhood experiences. After he reached home, he saw the clock...

Status: I've actually written 24 chapters so far, but Pokebeach's posting rules won't let me load them all at once. Help me keep this thread alive and I'll have more chapters to post. :) Reviews and constructive criticism are welcomed. It seems there is a small problem with chapters 1-7...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKTN5NHfwlQ Listen to Billy Madison's words of wisdom about high school. This is how I feel about graduation.