Recent content by vasoguardx

Sorry I haven't posted the next chapter yet. I've been on Spring Break and I left the notebook in which I have the next few chapters written in at home. I should be able to post it either on sunday or monday.

Great job! How long did this take to write?

Great job! It's very well written and you have a decently unique story. I scanned through chapter 1 and I did not see any run-on sentences that Shaymin mentioned. What do you plan to do with this story?

This seems like script for a play. It needs more expansion. I wouldn't call it a comic.

Thank you Lenny. Depending on how many views I have by tomorrow I may post the rest of chapter one. This is only part of it as I didn't want to scare anyone away from having to start off reading a whole lot.

First of all I'll start out by saying this is not your average pokemon fan-fic. After reading and writing numerous fan-fics I have noticed that people often concentrate on one of a few things in pokemon fan-fics that often hurt their potential. FFW (fan-fic writers) often concentrate on the...

The prologue is good. I'm just hoping that the following chapters will be a little longer.

I suggest that you split this up and add one chapter at a time if want readers. I know myself that by personal preference people don't feel motivated enough to start a fan-fic if it is already more than a chapter long. Add more chapters as you get more supporters. It may also help to space out...

Super Smash Bros. Ultimatum This is an alternate story to that of Super Smash bros. Brawl. You don't have to, but I suggest you read the character guide, even if you have played the games that each of the character's come from, since it is fairly different and is virtually a huge prologue to...

To recap: the Mayans didn't exactly predict that the world will end in 2012. It's just when their calendar ends a cycle, which could mean a number of things. Some people think it could be the start of a new era. The Mayans predicted things through their understanding of astronomy and...

There's too much white in it, making it look boring. If it's going to be that big make it a little more colorfull, but not too colorfull.

Just wondering, but are you going to update this any time soon?

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RE: Project Custom-The Elite Fan Creations Tournament BY INVITATION ONLY! Wow, I know I haven't been on for long so this is my first time to see this contest, and it's AWESOME. I was invited, but since I was very inactive I didn't participate (heck I didn't even find out about it until a few...