FireGod121's Fake Cards

FireGod121

I eat baby dolphins *BURP*
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hey every body i have just started making fake cards and i wanted to show you guys so here it is

My Set:
all images made by me do not steel

fakecardslixey.png



Requests:
not all images made by me

fakecardshimama.png


Request form:

Type:
Name:
HP:
Level:
Image:
Stage(pic if not basic):
(if not basic)Evolves from:
Specs:
Footer:
Weakness:
Resistance:
#:
Value:
Retreat:
who made the image:

Move 1:

Pokepower pokebody attach:

Name:
Damage:
Description:

(any other moves same as move 1)


credit to pokemoncardmaker.org
 
Type: Electric
Name: Shimama
HP: 60
Level: 20
Image: http://heerosferret.deviantart.com/#/d2rscm5
Stage(pic if not basic):
Weakness: fighting x2
Resistance: none
Value:
Retreat: 1
who made the image: Gin/heerosferret

Move 1:
Thunder Tackle 30+
Flip a coin. If heads this attack dose 10 more damage.
If tails, the defending Pokémon is now paralyzed.

Thanx dmaster for moving this to the right location.
 
Light Venusaur said:
Type: Electric
Name: Shimama
HP: 60
Level: 20
Image: http://heerosferret.deviantart.com/#/d2rscm5
Stage(pic if not basic):
Weakness: fighting x2
Resistance: none
Value:
Retreat: 1
who made the image: Gin/heerosferret

Move 1:
Thunder Tackle 30+
Flip a coin. If heads this attack dose 10 more damage.
If tails, the defending Pokémon is now paralyzed.

Thanx dmaster for moving this to the right location.

done
 
Not bad. Lots of font/placement issues but since you're not using great software it can't be helped.

What can be helped, however, is grammar -- both game text grammar and basic grammar (punctuation, capitalization, etc.). Incorrect game grammar can be, to an extent, excused (though you should look up grammar on a real card if you're confused), but basic grammar was poor on Shimama even though Light Venusaur typed it up for you.

Here's a few things I'm talking about...
*Capitalize names (IE Slixey),status effects (Poisoned, Paralyzed, etc.), the word Energy, Defending Pokémon.
*Use numbers, not words, when dealing with attack texts
*You put Pokémon from your hand onto your Bench (capitalize the word), not your deck

Work on grammatical issues and you'll be good.
 
CMP said:
Not bad. Lots of font/placement issues but since you're not using great software it can't be helped.

What can be helped, however, is grammar -- both game text grammar and basic grammar (punctuation, capitalization, etc.). Incorrect game grammar can be, to an extent, excused (though you should look up grammar on a real card if you're confused), but basic grammar was poor on Shimama even though Light Venusaur typed it up for you.

Here's a few things I'm talking about...
*Capitalize names (IE Slixey),status effects (Poisoned, Paralyzed, etc.), the word Energy, Defending Pokémon.
*Use numbers, not words, when dealing with attack texts
*You put Pokémon from your hand onto your Bench (capitalize the word), not your deck

Work on grammatical issues and you'll be good.

thanks ill work on it
 
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