Ultimate Battle

Where should MPM start from?

  • Where I left off.

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • Shortly before the tournament starts. (This will have some crazy ideas)

    Votes: 2 66.7%

  • Total voters
    3
On their way to Kumquat Island, in search for the Jade Star badge, the gang took a rest on the ship.  Erika and Shadow went to a spa, and Jay took one very long nap.  Max, was standing on the nose, watching the sea and passing islands.
“Hey,” said a voice from behind him.  He turned around to face Lindsey, and he said, “Hey.”
“I’m sorry about Furret.  I wanted to tell you that she and the other two are fine.”
“For now…This Team Rocket is much more deadly than the last.  I really hope they will be okay.  They are our favorite Pokémon, the ones that haven’t been out of our party since we caught them.”
“I’m sorry.”
“It’s not your fault.  By the way…”
Max grabbed a PokéBall on his belt, and it opened.  The baby Totodile jumped into Lindsey's arms, happy to see her.
“He missed you,” said Max.

After some catching up, they arrived at Kumquat Island.  They said their goodbye, and the gang headed off toward the gym.
“Jay,” said Shadow, “There is something you should know about the gym leader, Luana.”
“What?” asked Jay.
“Well,” said Max, “She does two-on-two matches.  Which means that this won’t be as easy as before.”
“Wait,” said Shadow, “All of the leaders with special rules usually multiply the rules now.  Which means…”
“Six-on-six?” asked Jay.
“Knowing her,” said Max, “I wouldn’t put it past her.”
They arrived at the gym, and Luana was waiting out there for them.
“Bout time you guys got here,” she said.
“We’ve had some,” said Max, “Trials…”
“I’ve heard.  And I’d assume you guys figured out that this will be a six-on-six battle, right?”
“We had a slight inclination,” said Shadow.
Then, from above, there was a scream, a girl yelling, “HELP ME!!!!!!!”
“Elle?!?!?” exclaimed Jay.  He looked in the air, and there was a girl riding a Dragonite that was being chased by Neo Team Rocket jet planes!
Jay hopped onto his Pidgeot and flew up without warning.  Max sent out Charizard, and him and Shadow got on to follow.
The jets began firing missiles at the girl, and Max yelled, “Flamethrower!”
Charizard opened its mouth wide and released intensely hot flames that destroyed the missiles.  Then, they fired more, and one hit the Dragonite!
The girl and her Dragonite began to fall toward the ground at a very fast speed.  Jay caught the girl on Pidgeot, and then Max said, “Haunter, go!”
Haunter flew out and expanded itself to catch the Dragonite.  The girl returned her Pokémon, then Max his own.
“Go, Dragonair!” said Shadow, “Ice Beam!”
“Flamethrower!” yelled Max.
The to opposite forces collided two of four planes.
Then, the one planes shot out a net, and it caught the girl, and they put on some kind of cloaking, since they mysteriously disappeared.

When they landed, Max yelled at Jay, “What in the name of Mew just happened?”
“That!” yelled Jay, “Was my sister.  She disappeared a long time ago, and I now know why.”
“Team Rocket captured her,” said Shadow.
“I didn’t want to tell you guys, but I suppose there really wasn’t a way around it this time.”
Luana came up to them, and said, “Are you all okay?”
“Yeah,” said Max, “Most of us, that is…”
“Do you guys need to hold off the battle?”
“No,” said Jay in a tone that none of them ever heard him use, “Let’s do this.”

In the gym, the battle was about to begin.
“The challengers may have five minutes to deliberate on their Pokémon selections!” said the ref.
“Okay,” said Max, “This is our last match, and it’s a big one.  We need to use Pokémon that work well together, while covering as many types as possible.  I’m thinking my Charizard and Nidoking.”
“That’s good,” said Shadow, “I think I’ll go with my Tyranitar and Dragonair.”
“Pidgeot and Ampharos,” said Jay.
They sent out their Pokémon, and it looked like a force to be reckoned with, and then, it was Luana’s turn.
“Alright,” she said, “Alakazam, Marowak, Azumarill, Venomoth, Scizor, Meganium, go!”
She sent out her whole party.
“BEGIN!!!!!!!” yelled the ref.
“Alright,” said Max, “Charizard, start things off with Smokescreen!”
Charizard let out a pitch black smoke that covered the field, and Dragonair used its power over weather to keep it from affecting its comrades.  
“Alright, Pidgeot,” said Jay, “Sky Attack!”
Pidgeot flew into the air, and dove in on Venomoth.  
“Scizor,” said Luana, “Iron Defense!”
Scizor blocked Venomoth and hardened its body, so when Pidgeot hit, it got hurt.
“Charizard, get rid of the smoke!” said Max.
Charizard flapped its wings hard, and as the smoke cleared, Luana’s Pokémon were lunging at them!
“Ampharos, Zap Cannon!” yelled Jay.
Ampharos shot a lightning-ball at Azumarill, and then Luana said, “Meganium, Light Screen!”
Meganium jumped in the way, and used an energy barrier to block the attack.
“Marowak, Bone Rush!” she yelled.  
Marowak began throwing its Bonemerang all over the place, knocking into all of the gang’s Pokémon.
“Tyranitar!” yelled Shadow, “Sandstorm!”
Tyranitar whipped up a sandstorm, and then Max said, “Nidoking, Charizard, Fire Blast!”
The duo released flames that wrapped around the tornadoes of sand, turning them into fire, and then, they hit each of the opponents.
Pidgeot had gotten back up, and Jay said, “Alright!  Mirror Move Charizard!”
Pidgeot saw what Charizard did, then Fire Blasted the opponents.
“Ampharos, Thunder!” said Jay, “Pidgeot, Mirror Move it!”
“Dragonair, Tyranitar,” said Shadow, “Blizzard!”
“Charizard, Nidoking,” said Max, “Fire Blast!  Together!  The Ultimate Tri-Attack!”
“Hydro Pump, Frenzy Plant, Psychic, Earthquake, Silverwind, Steel Wing!” yelled Luana.
The attacks collided in the center of the arena, and there was a huge explosion.  The smoke cleared, and each Pokémon was still standing, but barely.  Each one was breathing heavily, and ready to pass out.
“C’mon guys!” yelled Max, “Charizard, can you pull off a Blast Burn?”
Charizard stood up and nodded.
“Go!” yelled Max.
Charizard lobbed a tiny fire ball into the middle of the opponents.  It hit the ground, and there was a huge, fiery explosion.  It was about to hit his own partners, when Shadow said, “Tyranitar, Dragonair, Protect!”
The two protected their partners from the blast.
“Hydro Pump!” yelled Luana.  Azumarill released a huge Hydro Pump that stopped the Blast Burn dead in its tracks.
“Tyranitar,” said Shadow, “Use Crunch!”
Tyranitar lunged at the opponents with its tail, and then Luana said, “Light Screen Meganium!”
It blocked Tyranitar.
“Shadow,” asked Max, “Is it a good idea?”
“I think so,” said Shadow, “I got some good vibes last night.”
“Good,” said Jay, “Then let’s do it, cuz we’ve got no other option.”
“METRONOME!” they yelled together.
Charizard got a Hydro Cannon, Nidoking a Dragon Rage, Ampharos a Volt Tackle, Pidgeot a Brick Break, Tyranitar a Meteor Mash, and Dragonair got an amazing Psycho Boost.
They hit with an intensity like no other.  The smoke cleared, and all the Pokémon were knocked out, even the gang’s.
“First Pokémon to stand up will win for their team!” said the ref.
“Max,” said Shadow, “Have Nidoking use Metronome if he can.”
“Alright,” said Max, “Nidoking, Metronome!”
Nidoking’s horn began to glow, and then, its whole body followed suit.  
“Recover?” said Jay in amazement.
“Yes!” exclaimed Max.
“Alright Nidoking!” yelled Shadow.
Nidoking’s body was back to almost one-hundred percent, and it jumped up.
“The challengers win!” yelled the ref.

After the battle, Luana gave the gang the Jade Star Badge.
“Orange League is done for you guys now, huh?” she asked.
“Yep,” said Jay.
“That was an amazing battle,” said Shadow.
“Sorry,” said Max, “We’d love to stay and chat, but we’ve got things that need to be done ASAP.”
“I understand,” said Luana, “Best of luck in Johto and Hoenn.”
“Thanks,” they said in unison.

They decided to fly back, and they rode on Dragonair.  They went back to Pallet Town.

VOLUME TWO COMPLETE!!

PLZ COMMENT!!!!!!!

Things to look for in Volume Three:
Eight action-packed gym battles.
The Ruins of Alph.
The return of Jay’s sister and his mysterious past.
Other things I’ll think of as I write it….WHO KNOWS?????


SWEET! JUST NOTICED VOLUME TWO MADE THE 100TH POST!!!!!
 
boracay_jason said:
hey mpm can you add some more characters in the fic the one i pm'ed you about remember?if u cant its ok

like i've said, i can't add in anymore characters. there are going to be three new characters in the final two volumes, but they've been picked out since before i wrote this. however, when this story is done, i plan on writing a new one. Same characters as this one, but i will add in three new ones, so be on the lookout for my next fanfic.

and btw, Volume three is on its way!!
 
okay, school has been weighing down on me this week, along with a major case of writers block. i've got the first chapter of Volume three almost finished, and i will try to get it up by tonight or tomorrow morning. also, if anyone has been saving all my chapters on a single word document, please p/m me, as i have a favor to ask.

thanks a lot, and keep reading<--- (did i really just say that?) w/e....

-AMPM: Over and Out!!!!
 
Upon arrival in Pallet, Oak was awaiting them in his lab.
The stay was short, they simply switched their teams up again.
They flew into Saffron, where they took the Magnet Train that would take them outside of Newbark Town.
On the train…
“What Pokémon did you guys bring?” asked Max.
“Vaporeon, Espeon, Umbreon, Flareon, Aggron, and Manectric,” said Shadow.
“Dratini, Eevee, Ninetales, Gyarados, Machamp, and Charizard,” said Jay.
“Cool,” said Max, “I brought Charizard, Nidoking, Shroomish, Grovyle, Tailow, and Vibrava, not my most experienced team, but they’ll get there.”
“I can guarantee that,” said Shadow.
“Really?”
“Yep, had a vision last night for evolution in upcoming days for someone close. And, seeing as most of mine and Jay’s Pokémon are fully evolved…”
“Really? Awesome.”
Suddenly, the train came to an abrupt stop, and the lights flickered on and off.
“What’s going on?” asked Erika.
Suddenly, a bunch of guys in red and black suits came rushing in, they were wearing some strange head-gear as well.
“Snagem!” yelled Jay.
As he said that, the leader of Team Snagem, Gonzap, a big, muscular guy with the IQ of a Slowpoke, came in, and they hogtied the gang and took them away in sacks.
When they awoke, they were in a cave of some sort.
“Gonzap!” yelled Max.
“Let us go!” yelled Shadow.
Gonzap looked at some of his grunts, and, much to the gang’s surprise, he nodded.
“Sorry,” he said as his goons untied them, “I knew you guys wouldn’t listen unless I did it this way.”
“For a second,” said Max, “I thought you went back to your old ways.”
“Of course not, but I knew you still don’t trust me.”
“What do you want?” asked Jay.
“Well, me and my grunts are into a shipping business right now, and we passed by the old Cipher lab, the one shaped like a pyramid.”
“Are they using it again?” asked Max.
“I don’t think it’s Cipher, but someone else. We saw some lady in a black dress and white hair, along with a shady looking guy in a mask go in there with three Pokémon. I didn’t recognize who’s Jolteon and Starmie it was, but I’d recognize that Furret anywhere…it was yours Max.”
Max’s face went deathly pale. Erika said, “Max? What is it?”
“That lab,” said Max, “Is what Cipher used to make Shadow Pokémon, and I’m afraid of what might happen if Neo Team Rocket is using that lab with our Pokémon.”
“What are Shadow Pokémon?” asked Jay.
“Pokémon whose hearts have been artificially closed.”
“And what’s worse, they have stolen the two existing Snag Machines,” said Gonzap.
“Well,” said Wakin, his second in command, “We’ve been trying to track them. In the original Snag Machine, we put a homing device in it.”
“Alright,” said Max, “I need you to get a hold of that Snag Machine, preferably the one I used. Then, meet up with us wherever we are, okay? Now where are we anyways?”
“A cave just outside Newbark,” said Gonzap.

The gang and Gonzap separated, and they went into Newbark.

They went to Professor Elm’s lab, where they met with one of the world’s top Pokémon professors.
“Max,” said Elm, “I’ve got some bad news…”
“What?” said Max.
“You see, new trainers have been scarce lately, so I have had several Typhlosions, Feraligatrs, and Meganiums. And, the worst part is, Team Rocket has stolen all of them, and they headed off toward Orre.”
“They must be making Shadow Pokémon out of them,” said Jay.
“Probably, and that’s what I’m afraid of.”
It was enough said. Erika stayed at the lab, as the rest of the gang headed for the skies.

“Let’s see,” said Max, “Team Rocket used to have a base near Lake of Rage…”
“Should we start there?” asked Jay.
“Probably,” said Shadow.

As they arrived at the lake, they saw many Rocket and Galaxy grunts at the lake, using nets to capture all the Dragon Pokémon in the lake!
“Grovyle, Tailow, Aerial Ace!” yelled Max.
“Eevee, Dratini, Shadow Ball!” yelled Jay.
“Espeon, Umbreon, Psychic!” yelled Shadow.
They attacked the crates filled with Dragon types, and the Dragons weren’t happy with the people who had imprisoned them.
They began shooting Hyper Beams and Dragon Rages like there was no tomorrow. Once all the equipment was destroyed, they returned into the lake.
Then, a man in a dark robe and white mask came out of a jet, and said, “Well, well…The obnoxious trio.”
“Who are you?” asked Max as they landed.
“That is none of your concern. It is high time I got rid of you three. Go, Regice!”
“Regice?” asked Jay.
“As in the legendary Regice?” asked Shadow.
“Indeed,” said the man, “Regice, Superpower!”
Regice went flying at the teams Pokémon, and Shadow said, “Espeon, Umbreon, Helping Hand!”
The two knocked their partners out of the way of the attack, then Max said, “Tailow, fly high!”
Tailow went above the clouds, then Jay said, “Dratini, use Flamethrower!”
Dratini let out a hot flame that hit Regice hard.
“Regirock and Registeel,” said the man, “Go!”
The other two Regis came out, and he yelled, “Zap Cannon!”
they shot three huge electric orbs at them.
“Nidoking,” said Max, “Go!”
Nidoking jumped out and absorbed the attacks.
“Earthquake!” yelled the man.
There was a huge gap formed in the ground, and the teams Pokémon fell into it!
“Now Tailow!” yelled Max. Tailow shot down and nailed Regice, but to no avail.
The gang race to the open earth, and saw that Nidoking had slammed his fist into the side, and the teams Pokémon were hanging onto him. Then, he slipped!
They fell toward the lava, but then, a giant being appeared out of it and caught them!
“It’s Groudon!” yelled Max.
“What?” exclaimed the man.
Groudon rose to the surface, and the gangs’ Pokémon came by their respective trainers. Groudon turned to the man.
“Groudon!” yelled Max, “Use Eruption!”
Groudon turned and nodded in acknowledgement. He sent molten hot magma at the Regis.
They got hit hard, but they got back up, and began acting very ferociously.
“In the name of Mew,” said Max, “They’ve been turned into Shadow Pokémon!”
“Where’s that Snag Machine when you need it?” asked Shadow.
“Alright, you guys get out of here and find Gonzap. I’ll stay here.”
“Okay,” said Jay. Shadow and Jay returned their Pokémon, then Jay sent out his Charizard and they were off.
“Chris told me that you preferred fighting alone,” said the man, “Perhaps because you once hurt someone close to you? Your mother, I believe it was?”
“Shut up!” yelled Max, “This isn’t about me.”
“Ice!” yelled a man who came running up next to Max, “It’s time you returned that mask to me!”
“Kurt?” asked Max, “You know this creep?”
“All too well…go Shuckle!”
“Charizard, Nidoking, go!”
Charizard carried the two on top of Groudon, and then Max said, “Nidoking, Charizard, Groudon, use Overheat!”
“Shuckle! Use Earthquake!” yelled Kurt.
“Shadow Rush!” yelled Ice.
The Shadow attacks broke through and sent Max and Kurt’s Pokémon flying.
“Max!” yelled a familiar voice.
Max turned around; it was Shadow and Jay on Charizard and Gonzap on his Skarmory, carrying an item Max had never been so happy to see.
Gonzap flew over head and dropped it.
Max caught the Snag Machine and slipped it onto his hand.
“Here, Max,” said Kurt. He handed him three Master Balls.
“Thanks,” said Max, “Snag Balls, Go!”
The three Master Balls went flying at the Regis, and opened half-way there, and energy-like claws came out and snagged them. Within seconds, Max had captured the Regi-Trio.
“NO!!!!!!!” yelled Ice. He got into his jet and was off.

Once on solid ground and Groudon going back into the earth, the gang went to Azalea Town with Kurt.
“Here,” said Kurt when they arrived. He handed Max a flute.
Max played a tune that it was clear he knew very well, and then, Celebi appeared.
“Celebi,” said Max, “I’ve got a job for ya,” and sent out his new capture.
Celebi encircled the Regis with a green aura, and then, the black aura within them was released.
“Thank you!” said Max as Celebi went back into the time stream.
“Max,” said Jay, “What now? You own three legendary Pokémon!”
“I’ll show you.”
Max layed the Regis PokéBalls on the ground, and then sent out Nidoking.
“Nidoking,” said Max, “Thrash ‘em.”
“WHAT?!?!?!?”
Nidoking destroyed the PokéBalls.
The Regis left to go back to their homes.
“Did you just release legendaries?” asked Jay.
“Gotta keep the natural order of things, you know?” said Max.
“B-b-b-b-b-but…”
“It’s a concept I think he’ll learn soon,” said Shadow.
The gang went back to Newbark, where they would tell Elm of their adventure and they would be written down in Pokémon history.

THE MASTER QUEST HAS BEGUN!!!!!PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!
 
Oh man,you should have not release the regis,you can use them and just punch the neo team rocket 1 by 1 lol.
 
Metagross88 said:
Oh man,you should have not release the regis,you can use them and just punch the neo team rocket 1 by 1 lol.

lmfao! yeah, but MAx has the legendaries on call, they owe him big for freeing them.
 
Johnonb said:
hey mpm,
i think the stolen pokemon should become shadow :p

HEY! dont give away all my secrets! geez...jkjkjkjk. anyway, glad to see i've still got a fan base for this. didnt post for almost a week. i'm working on V3 C2 right now!
 
CURSES!!!!!i knew i forgot to warn someone! i've been sick the past week, and havent been able to get on. i promise a new chapter soon!

MPM
 
ATTENTION ALL ULTIMATE BATTLE FANATICS!!!
i dont think i am going to continue the story here anymore. soon, however, you can find the story on the Pokemon MAster Clan's new website. i no that a few of you have already joined, so be on the lookout!
 
Johnonb said:
what?!?!?

how come???

well, its because that i would like to post it there, and give my fellow clan members a good story. besides, arent you in the clan? i dont think youve got anything to worry about
 
Well, I can!! I am the leader of the PMC, and the link is on my sig.... you dont have to register to read the fanfics, theyre open to the public but if you would like to join the clan you must register there and pm me.


The link is in my Sig!

-Black Rayquaza

PS-MPM hasnt posted his fanfic in there yet, but hes been busy with Mid-Terms this week. Ill get on his case to post it ASAP! Also, my fanfic "The Legendary Quest" is on there now so everyones welcome to check that out and post/pm me comments and ratings!
 
So your never going to post chapter here again:( You should post them on more than 1 website. You have a lot of fans here.
 
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