EX:The God Showdown (help need) Please come

[jayjaymew]

This is my first series of card.That serie principal pokemon is arceus, darkrai and tyranitar so that is the list:
ps: i gonna coninute when i can ok

holo:

1.arceus (lv 80) (spoiler)
2.darkrai (lv 75)
3.tyranitar delta thunder (lv.90 with shock-wawe)
4.dialga delta fire (lv95)
5.palkia delta thunder (lv95)
6.giratina delta fire (lv.100 with elemental blast and 190 hp)
7.entei delta ground (lv 105 (wow!) with burn down)
8.entei fire (lv 300 hp 500(get!!!!) with elemental blast electro-mark shock-wawe and burn down)
9.salamence (lv.99) hp 200
10.flygon (lv 98) hp 190
11.altalria (lv97) hp 150
12.dragonite (lv.100) hp 220
13.yellow magikarp (lv 100 with 200hp lol!!!)
14.red gyaridos (lv 102 with 220 hp)
15.charizard (lv 120 with 290 hp)
16.black charizard (lv 200 with 320 hp)
17.pokemon movie 3 charizard (lv 102)
18.pokemon movie 3 entei (lv 105) (Finish!)
19.ash pikachu (lv90)
20.jay piplup (lv100) hp 150
21.dark arceus (lv999) hp 1000
22.mirage arceus (lv mirage100)
23.shaymin (lv30) hp 90
24.metagross (lv99)
25.electvile delta ground and fire (lv 100) hp 220

rare:
26.Heatran (Finish!)















common:




















uncommon:

































trainer:










energy:











EX:
mirage arceus EX (lv 999)
tyranitar ex delta (light) (reprint) (lv999)
darkrai EX (lv999)
legendary blaziken (lv unkown) hp infinite
Shaymin EX (delta) (W)
Entei EX (God type) (finish!)
Arceus Lv.X (spoiler)



star:
darkrai*
arceus*
tyranitar*
Dialga*
Palkia* (finish)

special:
Shadow Lugia EX (finish)

box topper:
10 movie darkrai (lv1000) hp 2000

secret holo
jay shiny entei (lv2000) hp 30000



Card:
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[jayjaymew]

Please im really need help

Psther scan here

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[Dragon Rider Of PokeBeach]

I'm no good at making cards but those three that you have are really broken.... I do like the first entei's pic though

 

[Zaroco]

Well I wouldn't reccomend having an attack for damage exceeding 200, 300 might work....

For starters, the heatran is probably the worst out of the three(no offense), usually you put the one with least energies and least damage first then more damage and more energies next.

Also I don't reccomend fissure on heatran, also what's with your resistances??? -2000 -_-

You've done a pretty good job, I hope this helps.

The best out of the three is the first one, hands down

EDIT: Not sure that Entie's retreat cost should be one.....And with magma storm, maybe the effect could be more realsitic....

 

[Pokemon-Striker]

the moves are very bad i can help you on those the picutes are fine the text are too small though
ill do one on arceus ill give it to you later if you like it
i dont know how to make cards but i can give to you the like the moves hp and resistance and stuff you know

 

[jayjaymew]

Ok thanks

 

[Pokemon-Striker]

Arceus Lv 87
HP100
Type (C)
Basic Pokemon

(C) Judgement
Flip a coin for each energy attached to the defendiing Pokemon, for each heads discard the energy attached to the defending Pokemon.
(F)(W)(G)(C) Call of Life
Put 3 damage counter to each of your opponent's Pokemon and remove five damage from each of your Pokemon.

"One which created the Universe with 1000 arms."
Weakness None
Resistance (M)(D)
Retreat (C)(C)(C)

Arceus Lv X
HP 200
Type (C)

Poke-Body Space Armor
Everytime a Pokemon does damage to Arceus Lv X put 3 damage counters on that Pokemon.

(C)(C)(C) Comets and Meteors 20x
Flip a coin for each of your opponent's Pokemon and for each heads this move does 20 times the damage to the defending Pokemon.
(F)(W)(G)(C) Supernova 200
Discard a (F),(W), and (G) attached to Arceus Lv X if you do not this attack does nothing. Does 50 damage to all Pokemon in play and Arceus does 100 to itself.

"Born before the universe it roams around in space"
Weakness None
Resistance None
Retreat (C)(C)(C)(C)
Tell me what you think

 

[jayjaymew]

oh it very good thanks you. new card spoiler

Palkia* hp130 type god

(Water)(C)spacial trick 50 switch your oppenent active pokemon with one benched pokemon (both your and oppennent)

(Water)(god)(C)(C)(C)(C) Spacial Rend 150 next turn Palkia* can't use spacial rend

weakness:none
ressistance:none
retreat:3

 

[jayjaymew]

I finish some card

 

[Pokemon-Striker]

I finish some card

can i ask you something are you trying to make cards of your own type or your trying to make cards like the real ones are?

 

[Charizard Masta1122]

Just A Hint...

If you want people to take you seriously don't make really broken cards.

Although I really like the Pic on the first Entei

 

[Pokemon-Striker]

i just found these in photobucket and there so good heres some example from him

http://s200.photobucket.com/albums/aa178/iananne07/pkmntcg/

 

[jayjaymew]

New spoiler!!

Dialga* HP 140 type mirage

(mirage)(m)time skip 70
Next turn your oppennent can't do anything and you can do what you want

(mirage)(m)(C)(C)(C)(C)Roar Of time 200
Next turn dialga can't use this attack

weakness:none
ressistance: (C)(Psy)(Grass)

 

[Charizard Masta1122]

Try This:

Dialga * Lv.78 HP 150 (m)

"You can't have more than 1 pokemon * in your Deck"

(mir)(m) Time Skip 50
Next turn, your oponent can't play any cards from his/her hand.
Dialga* can't use Time Skip next turn

(mir)(mir)(m)(m)(m) Roar Of Time 130
Move 2 (m) energies to a (m) type pokemon on your Bench. If you have no (m) type pokemon on your bench, this attack does nothing.

Weakness - (r) x2 Resitance - (p) -30 Retreat - (c)(c)

A powerful being created by ARCEUS, DIALGA has the power to control time.

 

[Charizard Masta1122]

Darkrai ex Lv. 65 HP 110 (d)

Pokepower: Ghostly Awakening
Once per turn, when you play Darkrai ex from your hand to your bench, you may choose one of the defending pokemon. That pokemon is now paralyzed for two turns.

(d) Sleep Song
Choose any Pokemon. Flip a coin, if heads, that Pokemon is now asleep.

(d)(d)(c) Dark Nightmares 30x
This attack does 30 damage for every Pokemon in play that is Paralyzed or Asleep.

Weakness: (f) +20 Resistance: (p) -30 Retreat: (c)(c)

It appears on moonless nights, and causes people to see gruesome nightmares.

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Heatran Lv. 68 Hp 90 (r)

Pokebody: Magma Figure
Whenever a Pokemon targets Heatran with an attack, you may flip two coins. If both are heads, the Attack fails and the pokemon that did targeted Heatran is now burned. If both are tails, the attack does 20 more damage to Heatran.

(r)(r) Lava Slam 30


(r)(r)(c) Fire Gather 60+
This attack does 60 damage plus 10 more damage for every pokemon that is burnt. Remove burn markers from all pokemon that have them.

Weakness: (w) +30 Resistance (m) -20 Retreat: (c)(c)

It lives inside caves in Volcanic Mountains and can hang from ceilings by digging in with it's feet.

 

[~Magma King~]

The type for those cards is acanthites light type-_-And shadow lugia ex sent me in hysterics.Those are quite broken.