My First FanFic!!

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Pikagal

Life is 4 dreamers and i'm a believer...
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ok this is my first fanfic.Its called 'Till death do we love'.WARNING:AdvanceShipping at its most!! Contestshipping and pokeship ping beware!!!( yes i ADORE advenceshipping) AshxMay 4EVER!!!!Also contains a beloved trainers death.( Ash) i got this idea from another fanfic i read.Enjoy!!!! (oh and its a story told from Mays point of view)( it takes place after Ash won all his battle frontiar symbols)
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Till Death Do We Love
I still can't belive it.I mean one day we're all having fun.Playing around.Laughing.Being happy.But it can be all taken away.Just like that.I did'nt think about sadness.I mean, after i lost the Kanto Grand Festival,I was upset.Ash told me that be win some, we lose some.That there was other Grand Festivals.I felt better.Then he won all his Battle Fontiar symbols.He was so happy.Then he said that someday,i would be a top coorinder and he'd be a pokemon master.I said that WILL happen.We were both happy.But then,it all changed.
We were heading back to Palet Town.On the way,he said that he was going to the Sinhoh Regin.I was happy for him.Soon we were climbing Mt.Moon.A while later, he pulled me back and asked of i was going to Johto with Drew.I thought about it.I rembered a while back,Drew asked me if i could go to Johto to ,compete in contests,with him.When i turned to think,i saw Ash staring.He looked sour faced.Then he saw me turn and he turned away.I said i'd let Drew know later.
I turned to Ash,'' i think so.'' ''i mean i did'nt go there let.'' Ash looked creastfallen.'' oh.i mean thats great.'' He turned and ran ahead.I try to see his face, but i could'nt.I wondered what was wrong.Then we all heard a cry.It was a Cleffa.It was holding on to dear life on a cliff.Before anyone could stop him,Ash ran to it.""ASH WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?'' Brock called.Ash did'nt anwser.I ran to.Brock and Max called out,but i pretened not to lisen.When i got to the top,i saw Ash trying to grab the Cleffa.'' don't worry i got you!!''.I heard him said.As soon as i ran to him,the cliff broke.''ASH!!!!'' i screamed.He grabed the Cleffa and threw it at me.I caught it and placed it gently on the ground.Frighted,it ran off.''Ash!!'' I called again.i tryed to grab his hand,but it slipped.''NO'' Ash fell.I froze.I ran to the bottem of the cliff.''ASH!'' i could'nt see him anywhere.Then i found his hat.I looked around franticly.Then i heard him moan.I ran to his side.He did'nt look to good.There was blood on his hands.''Do't worry,you'll be ok!!'' i told him.But he shoke his head.''no''I began to cry.I felt Pikachu ran to him.He was crying too.

To Be Contiuned
 
Umm.... INTERESTING.. a little un-organized, but INTERESTING...
 
ummmmmmmmmm thanks?

now to continue::


''pika pi.....'' Pikachu wailed.''No Ash please.....'' I could'nt help wimpering.Ash gave a very weak smile.Then a moan of pain.''May...... i...i....,i wish i told you from the start.That i....i.... loved you.'' i could'nt belive it.Ash nodded slowly.I just blinked.It all made sense; thats why he looked sp nervous when i told him i was going to Johto with Drew.And Ash always helped me.I nodded back.The tears came back.Pikachu began wailing.''Ash please stay.I love you too....'' Ash just stared with half closed eyes.I began tp sob.Then Ash leanes over and kissed me.Then he murmured, in my ear,'' May i will always be with you....''I huged him.But it was too late.Ash was gone,Forever.
--------------------One Day Later---------------------------------
It happened so fast.Helicopters came.Mrs.Ketchum rushed over.She saw me with Ash.I was still crying.But it was too late.The feunerl was on Mt.Moon.Around pokemon.I could'nt watch it.I just watched from a distance.Pikachu was with Mrs.Ketchum.He looked horrible.Second to Mrs.Ketchum,Misty,who came as soon as she heard,was crying like crazy.I knew why: she loved Ash too.Professor Oak and Gary were there.So was my parents,Max was next to my mom.Ash was like a big brother to him.Brock was there too.Also there was some guy i never saw.He reminded me of Ash;Black hair and brown eyes.He also wore a hat like Ash's and had a Raichu with him.He was looking at Mrs.Ketchum in a funny way.I kept watching all of them.
I could'nt take it.I hated the black dress i was waring.I hated the saddness that filled the air.I hated the fact that Ash was gone forever.What seemed like an hour later, i looked up: Everyone was still there.Then i heard someone talking.it was Drew.''Hey May'' he said.''Sorry about your friend.'' He sounded only a little sorry.''When did you come?'' i asked him.[/i]
''Only a while ago'' was his anwser.I just turned to look at the grave site.'' So you still coming to Johto?'' Drew asked.I looked back at him.I think Drew liked me.I stared at him in anger.''NO!!! NOT WITH YOU!'', i brusted out.I stood up quickly.''Ash told me to do my best! So i will!! But not with you!''I yelled.Then came the sobs.They came angrily.I turned my back and walked away.''May!!'' i heard him called.I turned around.''May why lison to Ash now.He's dead!'' That got me mad.''NO HE'S NOT DEAD! HE'S WITH ME RIGHT NOW!'' i yelled again.Then i realized it was true.
I WILL CONTINUE THE REST OF THE STORY TOMORROW!!
 
Umm... I'm all for the, "Ash loving May" thory, but... oh well. Not bad, for first try! What's the story title?
 
I looked at Drew with hard,cool eyes.he's still with me right now....echoed in my head.[/i]i'm i really right?[/i]i thought.Drew just sneered.'' whatever may.'' but mark my words.there will be only one top coorindater right here,it WILL be me!''Drew walked away.Leaving me alone again.i fell to the ground.i stared at the ground.Then i heard someone coming.i did'nt even brother to see who it was.'''May,is it true that Ash kissed you!?''I t was Misty.i looked up.her eyes were not only red with saddness,but with anger.i wondered how she found it.i nodded slowly.Misty gasped with discust.''NO!'' i stood up and faced her.before i could saw anything,she slapped me.Then stomped away.Then something occured to me; Misty and Drew both hated me now.and Ash left me.[/i]Was i destined to be alone?[/i]
I shook my head.No i thought.I turned to see everyone eles.they were still there.I curled up next to a cave wall.Then something brushed me.It was Pikachu.He was crying alot.''Pi pi ka chu'' he said.I rubbed his head.Pikachu sobbed.It held him close.I began to sob too.Then i closed my eyes......
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When i opened my eyes,i saw that i was sitting on a grassy hill.I was'nt on Mt.Moon anymore.it felt happy here.i stood up.I looked around.''Pika pi?'' Pikachu was here too.''where are we pikachu?'' i asked him.then pikachu's ears purked up.Then he ran off.''Pikachu?!''i ran after him.Pikachu did'nt even stop.or turned.''Pikachu wait up!!''Pikachu kept running.Then i tripped.''Great!!''I stood up.Pikachi was'nt even in sight.''PIKACHU!!''i called out.No answer.I walked on.flowers were everywhere.it was bright and sunny.
i walked more up a hill.then i walk slowly down,busy thinking.Then i tripped on my dress.i thought i was going to fall hard,then something caught me.''you ok'' it said.i knew that voise.I looked up.my heart began to race.I saw those brown eyes.''Ash?'' he nodded.''Pika pika!!!'' Pikachu was on his shoulder.He looked so happy.''Ash.....'' i could'nt find words.''told ya you won't be alone.''Ash said.''its so great to see you again!!''i hugged him.''same here'' he replied.He looked at me.''May you can't grive forever.'' '' i know'' i told him.''i hope you'll still become top coorindater'' he said. i sighed.''Ash you never became a pokemon master.like you wanted...'' ''i know, but i seen places,met friends and pokemon( he patted Pikachu),been in great battles, and i met YOU.i left a happy person May.It's better than leaving a sad,lonly person.'' i nodded.i did'nt want to mention what happened with Misty and Drew.i just stood there.''May don't give up on your dream because of me.Chase them.''Ash said.i nodded again.i vowed that i would never give up.'' and i want Pikachu to be with you every step of the way.''I stared at him.''if thats what pikachu wants'' he contiuned.''Pika pika!!'' pikachu went.''Don't worry Ash,i will.'' i told him.Ash smiled.''i'll be there too....''We hugged again.i did'nt want to let go.''time to go back,Ash murmured.....
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I opened my eyes.Ash was gone.Pikachu looked at me.we were back at Mt.Moon.But i felt brighter.Ash was still with me.I looked at Pikachu.''pikapika chu!!''he said.I stood up.Love will be between us.forever.
____________ one year later________________________

''Pikachu use thunderbolt!!'' i cried.yep i year past since Ash died.I was in the Johto Grand Festival.I was battling .... Drew.it was the first time we saw each other since the furernal.He was cold and bitter to me.So was i.He knocked out my Espeon with his Butterfree,then Pikachu k.o.ed Butterfree.it was Pikachu verus his Roserade.It was the finals.If one of us won, we would win the grand festival.Pikkkkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaachuuuuuuu!!!!!''The thunderbolt raced at Roserade.''Roserade douge it and use solarbeam!!'' Drew commanded.The Roserade zoomed past the bolt and shot a solarbeam at pikachu.we were ready.''Pikachu use agility!!'' Pikachu was now zooming around Roserade.''Now VOLT TAKCLE!!'' ''Pikapikapikapikachuuuuuu'' Pikachu was like a bolt of lighting.It was a hit.Roserade was KOed.''the winner is May and Pikachu!!" the Mc yelled.''yay pikachu!!'' i ran to him and hugged him.i looked up.Drew was gone.A min later,the Mc handed mr the Ribbion Cup.The crowd went wild.''We did it pikachu'' i murmured.''Nice Job you two.....'' i heard someone said in my ear. it was Ash.Then i felt a brush againce my cheek.i think Ash kissed me.''Pika pika''pikachu went.He looked like someone was rubbing him on the head.i knew it was Ash. we were both happy.''thank you Ash.I love you...'' i murmured.i hugged pikachu harder.
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The End
yep thats it!! my 1st fanfic and was so sad.i don't have anything againce Ash.or misty.or drew.i just like addvance shipping.:)
night y'all!!
 
Oh my gosh......I cryed and I could vividly see this as a movie your a great writer!
Look you even brought Mew to tears!
 
thanks!!So sorry Mew!!
my next fanfic should be happier!!
( don't feel bad,i started to cry a little too!!) but i think stories should be like that; give emotions.
 
*Mouth hangs open*. Short, but sad. But, creepy, but good. Poor grammer/spelling, but still organized. TOo romantic, but, no, that sums it up. Too romantic.
 
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