The Ultimate Fanfic Jake The next Pokemon Master!

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The Pokemon Master Forever

Episode 1 The Journey Begins!



In Pallet Town.Jake's Mom:Jake!Get up!It's already 9:00am!You need to get dressed and get your pokemon from Proffesser Oak!
Jake:Oh Alright.Why do I have to get up so early to get my pokemon and start my journey?As Jake got up he thought about which pokemon he should get and about what his journey was going to be like.
Then Jake quickly got dressed and ran downstairs to the kitchen.Jake's Mom:Heres your pancakes but eat quickly or your going to be late.Jake:I know I'm eating.
Jake quickly ate.Then he grabbed his backpack,put it on,said goodbye to his mom,and ran out the door.Jake's Mom:Bye!And Good luck!




To Be Continued
(Sorry I had to make this so short but my mom said I have to go to bed right now)
 
It looks pretty bad, so far. Nothing seperates it from 99 of the other fanfics around.Your grammar isn't very good. I would work on improving it before attempting to write a full-fledged fanfic.
 
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