DPPt: Time Capsule!(Electabuzz Lv. X card added!)

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RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

Yeah it does, but the damage part of Typhoon Wave needs to be reworded like Primeape's attack, and Mega Rage probably needs a better name. Other than that it's great.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

Kk I will edit those changes, which part of the wording do you not like? And thinking of names is kinda hard, but I got one I think.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

Go check out the newest Primeape for proper wording on the damage effect of Typhoon Wave, he does something similar.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

Lastly gonna ask you to capitalize terms such as Pokemon, Trainer, etc and the second word in eah attack name,also I think ti should be discarded energy, not Pokemon, who are much harder to get in there.

And take out the picture symbols for text(like [W][C]and the like
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

for the symbols, should I just write like WWC or like spell it out?
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Nice work, Dauntless (and nice artwork, as well!). The card really conveys Cloyster well, and while the Body can be annoying isn't really broken. In a format where most decks can hit 70+, they can most likely still two-hit KO Cloyster due to its low HP, so nice thinking there. However, if you're lucky with a coin (which, again, limits playability), you can actually do a good bit of damage to any Pokemon.

All-in-all, an annoying Pokemon. Might work nice with Nidoqueen RR, if it existed. The fact that it requires coin flips to be really good, however, balances its annoying factor.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Poliwag HP 40 lv12 [W]

[W] Aqua Swirl
The Defending Pokemon is now Asleep

[W] Bubble 10

W-[L]+10
R--20
RC-[C]

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Poliwhirl HP 60 lv.23 [W]
Stage 1-evolves from Poliwag

[W][W] Choices
You may either attach a [W] Energy or a [F] Energy to Poliwhirl. If you attach a [F] Energy, search your deck for Poliwrath and place it on top of Poliwhirl. If you attach a [W] Energy, search your deck for Politoed and place it on top of Poliwhirl. Both of these count as evolving Poliwhirl. If Poliwhirl is affected by a Special Condition, you can't use this attack.

[W][W] Water Gun 20+
Flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 20 damage plus 10 more damage.

W-[F]+20
R--20
RC-[C]

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Poliwrath HP 130 lv.50 [F]

Stage 2-evolves from Poliwhirl

Poke-Power: Fighting Spirit
Once during your turn (before your attack) you may use this power. If Poliwrath is your active Pokemon, you may choose up to 3 basic [F] Energies from your hand and attach them to Poliwrath. If you do, your turn ends. If Poliwrath is affected by a Special Condition, you can't use this power.

[F][F] Mach Punch 50x
Flip a coin for all the number of Energies attached to all your Pokemon in play. This attack does 50x the number of heads.

[F][F][F] Sky Uppercut 100
Flip a coin. If heads, discard an Energy card from your hand and this attack does 20 to each of your opponent's Benched Pokemon.

W-[P]
R-[D]
RC- [C][C]

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Politoed HP120 lv.50 [W]

Stage 2-evolves from Poliwhirl

Poke-Body: Happy Splashing
Each of your Poliwag, Poliwhirl, Poliwrath and Politoed get +20 HP. Even if you have more than one Politoed in play, the amount increased is always 20.

[W][W] Happy Slap 30
Discard a card from your hand. Now draw a card for each of your Benched Pokemon.


[W][W][C] Aqua Therapy
Discard two Energy cards attached to Polited, and remove all Damage Counters and Special Conditions from all your Pokemon.

W-é+30
R--20
RC-[C][C]


Do you like them?
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

OK, decent body going on with Politoed, but the cards are massively underpowered. 3 energies for 80 isnt a big deal anymore, it's EXPECTED, and nothing costs any [C] Energy at all here, making it hard to manage. The power has really gotta go up, the HP is already way too low. Politoed should have 110-120 and Wrath should have 130.

PokeChamp said:
Nice work, Dauntless (and nice artwork, as well!). The card really conveys Cloyster well, and while the Body can be annoying isn't really broken. In a format where most decks can hit 70+, they can most likely still two-hit KO Cloyster due to its low HP, so nice thinking there. However, if you're lucky with a coin (which, again, limits playability), you can actually do a good bit of damage to any Pokemon.

All-in-all, an annoying Pokemon. Might work nice with Nidoqueen RR, if it existed. The fact that it requires coin flips to be really good, however, balances its annoying factor.
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lol, if you get a lot of heads, they'll just be more annoyed. Also, did you notice the evolution bar? :0 This set will use RBY and GCS sprites instead of stock art.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Dictator Dauntless said:
OK, decent body going on with Politoed, but the cards are massively underpowered. 3 energies for 80 isnt a big deal anymore, it's EXPECTED, and nothing costs any [C] Energy at all here, making it hard to manage. The power has really gotta go up, the HP is already way too low. Politoed should have 110-120 and Wrath should have 130.

lol, if you get a lot of heads, they'll just be more annoyed. Also, did you notice the evolution bar? :0 This set will use RBY and GCS sprites instead of stock art.
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Yes, I did noticed. Very cool. Is it okay if I make one more line of cards? Or have I reached my limit?
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Dictator Dauntless, are you going to use the Remoraid art I PMd you? All you had to do was say yes or no, but you never even mentioned a word about it :p
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Aside from some wording mistakes, Cloyster looks pretty good. The power is a bit overpowered, though - retaliating for a possible 40 damage (which can't be blocked by stuff like Unown G) every time you get hit (for half damage) is pretty nuts. Getting this thing out early game makes for some powerful stalling. Give this dude some healing and your opponent will either have to shut off his body or do obscene amounts of damage to 2hko him (assuming your opponent doesn't heal him during their turn).
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

True. I actually do plan on testing these cards as I go, so don't fret. If it's too much, I'll lower the bar.

Sorry squirtli, but not really.

Eh, go for another Champ.

Again paddy, underpowered. Finishing strike would be very rarely useful I LIKE the power and body, I don't like the attacks.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

I'd like to attempt Quilfish, if that's alright with you.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Cloyster added!)

Qwilfish Lv.29 HP70
Basic Pokemon

[.] Balloon Form
During your opponent's next turn, reduce any damage done to Qwilfish by 20. During your next turn, Qwilfish's retreat cost is reduced by [C].

[W] Sharpshooting
Choose one of your opponent's Pokemon. This attack does 20 damage to that Pokemon. (Don't apply weakness and resistance for benched Pokemon.)

Weakness: [L]+20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C]
 
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